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When the Sun Comes

Out of a wild rain storm In the wings The sun stands nervous On cue but with notes she hadn't planned Feathered and caught by reaction she hides her beauty For so hot Herself burns true

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2022 5:26:00 AM

Creative work about the amazing sun which is set just so that the earth can come alive. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 7/13/2022 8:21:00 AM

Nice piece of brevity Jo with nice good imagery and insightfulness. We've had a mixed day having gone with a t-shirt and shorts so got caught in rain coming off the bus so a hot shower required to heat me up! xx

Jo Hayton
Date: 7/13/2022 2:47:00 PM

Thanks Gordon. Yes can't beat Northern weather, never know where you are ??, thankyou for lovely comments x