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When the Ship Sank

(When the ship sank) When the ship sank I was on deck, my flute sang a holiday, my legs were trembling like a whale Cabin sat on whiskers, spills swerved the seas. Dennis was close hey hey,check the wind,check the wind Cool like frigidity lady whupped the deck Metals creaked all hell let loose hulls croaked Like frump unattached to the muscle of hope. When the ship sank I was on deck, my flute sang a holiday, and after a year or so my ribs found another deck chomped my sea animals corralled by weeds blue, brown, pink and red You may say its just a story, well said and sad. ________________________________________ © RAJAT KANTI CHAKRABARTY 16th November,2014

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Date: 11/17/2014 1:12:00 PM
Those poems were titled, "Aboard The Titanic" and "Aboard The Titanic - Part 2"
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/17/2014 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Kelly, Love XXXXX RAJAT
Date: 11/17/2014 12:18:00 AM
A very haunting tale you have told here, Rajat. Your vivid descriptions give the reader a feeling of being there on that deck. Good work!... I have written two poems about being onboard the Titanic. You might like to read them!
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/17/2014 4:43:00 AM
This is the dedication to the intrepid sailors who ruled the seas through the ages. Great comments Kelly. I will read your poems.Love and take care XXXXX RAJAT

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