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When we met- I knew it would be forever, Those dark fathomless eyes and that deep voice; We shared many magic moments so nice, Such lovely walks along the beach hand in hand. We would walk slow talking about whatever, Oh, that special place we lay beneath a tree; That perfect blue azure sky and gentle breeze, And those rolling waves that caressed the sand. This special memory is beautiful and grand, You kissed my ruby lips, whispering sweet words; And we were lost in our love- lulled by singing birds, I wish, I had the power to have time freeze. Like vines twining, growing together, so did our love, Now, I weep at your tomb- " forever and ever my love." __________________________________ June 7, 2016 Poetry/Canzone/When The Heart Wants Copyright Protected, ID 16-798-386-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The Color Of Love sponsor, Casarah Nance Sixth Place Poem of the Day, June 9, 2016

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Date: 7/7/2016 1:33:00 PM
What a beautiful write, great imagery and rhyme, sad ending but hope in love lives on.
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Date: 6/12/2016 7:36:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on having this great poem featured as POTD! #7 ; )
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Date: 6/11/2016 1:26:00 PM
Broken Wings,congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo
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Date: 6/10/2016 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations, Broken Wings. Beautiful poem! ...Fran
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Date: 6/10/2016 7:59:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your lovely poem being honored as Poem Of The Day on June 9, and for your nice placement in 'the colors of love' contest today! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/10/2016 6:48:00 PM
Lovely write, Constance! Congrats!
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Date: 6/10/2016 6:47:00 PM
Beautiful, and also congrats on the POTD!! A Canzone, huh?? I wonder if I ever did one of those.
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:58:00 PM
- Congratulations on your sixth place at your beautiful poem, B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:38:00 PM
Beautiful but sad ending. Congrats my lovely beautiful friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:36:00 PM
This... wow...that last line...wow.... !!
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Date: 6/10/2016 4:19:00 PM
Sad twist at the end,a very lovely poem that warms the heart,congratulations BW!
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Date: 6/9/2016 8:31:00 PM
such a great poem held together by powerful imagery! I love the ending !
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Date: 6/9/2016 6:34:00 PM
Broken, so good to see a poem, of yours as poem of the day, so worth my time here. SKAT
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Date: 6/9/2016 5:57:00 PM
Hi, Broken Wings! Congratulations on your beautiful poem being honored as Poem Of the Day! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:18:00 PM
A sad ending to a wonderful poem Constance. I enjoyed the imagery and your use of alliteration...congrats on the POTD
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Date: 6/9/2016 4:13:00 PM
a jewel of a poem so beautifully done, constance... congrats on the POTD and contest win!..huggs
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Date: 6/9/2016 3:50:00 PM
Sometimes we wish we had the power to freeze time, but alas our wishes and destiny do not always see eye to eye! Such a sad and yet beautiful poem, Constance. Congrats on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 6/9/2016 3:11:00 PM
Beautiful and so sweetly done. Congrats on the poem of the day and contest winner. Marilyn
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Date: 6/9/2016 1:41:00 PM
Oh so beautiful so sad an ending - good luck in the contest and congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/9/2016 10:50:00 AM
As soon as I read it as poem of the day I knew it was yours. Beautiful poem BW.
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Date: 6/9/2016 9:45:00 AM
Broken Wings, Congrats to you for the POTD! This is a touching write!
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Date: 6/9/2016 7:09:00 AM
- Congratulations with your beautiful poem today, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/9/2016 6:51:00 AM
Congratulations BW for POTD honors and best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 6/8/2016 8:55:00 PM
Beautiful and sad write Wings...brings back memories...god bless...^WW^
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2016 10:55:00 PM
Winged, thanks for the visit and the nice comment, appreciate ~
Date: 6/8/2016 2:33:00 AM
Excellent. Very deep thought. Well done. Thanks for sharing it
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Constance La France
Date: 6/8/2016 10:56:00 PM
Rave, thanks for the excellent, I love that word ~
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