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When the Cookie Crumbles

When the cookie crumbles And everything goes wrong It’s time to make some changes And sing another song Just lift yourself backup And dust yourself down Watching all those cares Just falling to the ground It maybe crunch time You’ve made a new choice Now just listen very carefully To your still inner voice Because when the music playing And you’re not in tune It might be telling you something Something special waiting for you So when the cookie crumbles And it’s time to move along Don’t be scared of the future Just sing a brand new song © Copyright K.C.Leake 18th December 2015 All Rights Reserved

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Date: 1/26/2017 2:22:00 PM
Such a cool poem, Kevin. I love the perseverance spirit you evoke in this wonderful ditty. Had me humming an old Michael Franks song in my head as I was reading, "When the Cookie Jar is Empty." Nice flow and bounce this poem has. Love it. Pure 7 up. Love and joy to you.
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Date: 9/24/2016 12:35:00 PM
Sooo upbeat. Bravo!
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Date: 12/30/2015 3:30:00 PM
Kevin...Happy New Year ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/25/2015 4:32:00 AM
Inspiring and nicely said, I enjoyed this poem very much. 7
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Date: 12/22/2015 2:19:00 PM
LOVE THIS UPBEAT AND INSPIRING POEM! I've had a great many cookies crumble on me in my long life and your advice always served me quite well.! A7
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/23/2015 3:08:00 AM
Thanks Robert, Glad you enjoyed this, merry Christmas to you and your family!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 12/22/2015 1:54:00 PM
Excellent advice... you have a secondary job waiting for you as a song writer! Great flow and rhyming! Well done. Keith
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/23/2015 3:07:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment Keith, Glad you enjoyed it!!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Date: 12/18/2015 10:13:00 AM
and that's how the cookie crumbles. Love the uplifting message. SKAT
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Kevin Leake
Date: 12/18/2015 11:09:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed the message Skat, Good luck for the future!!! Best Wishes Kevin

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