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When Tears Touch Ii a Collab With Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Sitting lax, Speakers on ears: "(You should know better) Dream of better lives the kind which never hate (You should see why) Dropped in the state of imaginary grace (You should know better)... ...I'll stop the world and melt with you You've seen the difference and it's getting better all the time..." Then Immediately it stopped cause... [Fasten your belts please.... In five minutes we will be landing.] --------------------------------------------------------- Back, left and right, I walk and glance to search; More than five feet tall girl with long jet black hair... She said she will be in purple collar dress [With that one in a million glossy awesome smile...] Here there and everywhere, my eyes and feet run 'round Tiger eyes seeking at the sea of crowd on the lounge Picturing a tall fair man with some bluish eyes in her mind. He told her he will be in his khakis and blue sleeves  My heart flutters high as I pass a gaze with each man I see My diaphragm seems to work twice than usual as I spree. Palms began to warm though outside a shower of snowflakes.. My throat gone desert dry as I am excited of the sight... Around are persons saying warm hello's and some are hugging Each one busy on little chitchat at the lobby ground While some are still carrying some of their bags and luggages. As it's worth the wait... worth the solitary wait... My cheeks and nose turning smokey rosy drifts [as there in the left end corner is he} Thunder eyes sparkle a blinding light  [as there in the right corner is she] Wide smile formed in two thin lips showing white teeth Arms and hands on tidal waves as they are running. running. running... Running half-way... Even the ticking clock halts to watch.... Black and blue eyes locked in one steady stare 'till they stopped face to face eyes talking as they shake hands tight eyes and hands together, no one breaking free Seems they are the only ones there  Uncaring the others, all smiles then one moment tears of joy touch   as they embrace...  Soppy eyes converse. Dreaming of better lives  the kind which never hate The kind that never had been blemished by such evil from the world Dropped in the state of imaginary grace Shall never try to be that unkind,  Instead... this heart pumps to unfurl... © Olive Eloisa Guillermo and James Fraser Written November 6, 2014 .

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Date: 11/6/2014 6:30:00 PM
:) thanks much MR. James.. :D I shall not say anymore than being delighted to write poetry with you.. :D
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James Fraser
Date: 11/9/2014 5:41:00 PM
Olive, it's always a joy writing with you. We will write other collab's together in the coming weeks months. Tonight I looked back at my artwork, aged 53, it's another avenue I also need to dedicate time 2. It's been so many years, 1992 to be exact, yet I still have a piece of Art unfinished = lazy me, time to fix. I thank you from my heart for the writes, and the gracious comments, James :)
Date: 11/6/2014 2:43:00 PM
This is awesome guys...I love it....How many have dreamed of this moment...brilliance....love the intro song too....Tim
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James Fraser
Date: 11/9/2014 5:59:00 PM
Olive is certainly the one to have those accolades. For a poet whose language being English is second, she's some girl when it comes to writing. All I can say is thank you, your comments are always appreciated, James :)
Date: 11/6/2014 12:59:00 PM
I was gripped from start to finish and oh when they met - wow - amazing imagery throughout - James and Olive this is sensational! Hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2014 5:58:00 PM
I have the same connection when I write with Darren - with little or no alteration just a pure flow and energy between us. I just hope and pray he will return to us and we will begin writing again when he is well:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 11/9/2014 5:54:00 PM
An absolute joy writing this with Olive. She is certainly what the Soup needs for today, and tomorrow. Ideas appear to bounce and resonate, when it comes to writing, that's a joy indeed. Thank you kindly Jan..........xxxx

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