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'When souls are connected'

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'When souls are connected'

It was a warm January 1st, but now as evening falls, it is raining and so cold. We walk along silently, I am lost in my thoughts, we have not talked in blocks. The city traffic, a loud hush, lights of shops blazing bright, and people rushing past us. The cold wraps around us, like a dark wet blanket, and I tremble from the chill. He removes his leather jacket, placing it on my shoulders, he smiles and kisses my lips. It is a small gesture, but it speaks of great love, more that any words could. We continue quietly along, hands touching as we stroll, no words are needed at times. 'When souls are connected' _______________________ June 10, 2013 Narrative For the contest, Leather jacket on shoulders First Place

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  1. Date: 8/1/2013 9:50:00 AM
    Wonderful :) Congrats :D

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:16:00 AM
    "tremendously awesome........... congrats!!! SKAT"

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 3:52:00 PM
    Constance congratulations on your win warm Smiles Connie

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:00:00 AM
    A lovely poem. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:10:00 AM
    my, you have been busy, my friend - great to see your muse is positively shouting in your ear. I agree with Russell - a sure first place winner here

  1. Date: 6/10/2013 12:11:00 PM
    If this doesn't earn the first place position I'd be very surprised my friend! This write is so very tremendous Constance! I really loved reading this delightful poem this afternoon! What a powerful message of love is portrayed within this piece, Great Work!!