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When Sky Said Happy Birthday

Night was coming one July on the 14th day. And there was a birthday girl sad to see sky grey. Suddenly from heights above, three gulls sweeping in formed two eyes and one wide smile just for Carolyn. For Carolyn Devonshire's Contest: Heaven Sent Smiles

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Kash Poet

Date: 2/24/2011 11:30:00 AM

Nice write !Glad to know Carolyn's b'day is 14th july---kash

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/23/2010 11:36:00 PM

was just about to leave here---hahaha even in our writes, we pretty much get dinged on something!! check out my "Love's Fate"-- hahahaha-- btw I think he blocked me?? can't soupmail him & my comment to him didn't show up!! did he block you? hugs!

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/20/2010 7:13:00 AM

Hey Andrea, not sure if I congratulated you on this piece.. and yep Miss Fickle is Wilma hehe.. Figured I would have a little fun with my nickname.. luv Wilma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/19/2010 3:57:00 AM

That photograph was amazing! I felt birthday wishes inspired, too. Congratulations. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 7/13/2010 3:11:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Andrea! And thanks for leaving comments on my "Deep In Her Bosom". Always means a lot! Hugs, JA

James Fraser

Date: 7/12/2010 12:49:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win Andrea, with this lovely shortie >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/12/2010 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Heaven Sent Smiles". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 9:31:00 PM

Congrats on the HM win, Andrea.

John Freeman

Date: 7/11/2010 3:56:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your poem's success in Carolyn's contest. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/11/2010 12:06:00 PM

Cute poem, Andrea. I appreciate the birthday wishes. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 7/11/2010 10:45:00 AM

So glad to know the date of Carolyn's birthday. The gull being my favorite bird, I will send a flock to Carolyn. Love, Dave

Grace Eunsong Lee

Date: 7/11/2010 7:29:00 AM

Aw how sweet!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 7/10/2010 3:48:00 PM

That one is so cool and sweet! Andrea! Good luck in the contest. Should be a winner. And I'm glad to know I misinterpreted your poem before. Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/10/2010 10:41:00 AM

Very cute Andrea and good luck in the contest.. my uncle's birthday is the same day and am going to see him .. he will be 80 ..and still works.. omg..with luv..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/10/2010 12:33:00 AM

this is really sweet, Andrea!! I'm sure Carolyn would love this! loved your title too! I sure could picture those birds creating that smile just for her ^_^ way to go with this cheery piece! hugs -- nikko :)