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she rises a wave, a whim, a sun she rises every time born new a beach, a gust of wind and she rises a storm of thoughts the calmness of stars in the back of the black sea at night she rises as the hair upon me stands to tingle she rises

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Date: 3/15/2022 5:52:00 PM
The form + message fit together like snow to winter. A fine write, Vernon. Your use of repetition is equally effective. Best wishes, Brian
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