When She

That look in her Scotsman's eyes When his darling opened her thighs Such a welcoming sight He entered his night As loving groans mellowed to sighs .

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Date: 4/10/2015 11:43:00 PM

a sexy one!!

James Fraser
Date: 4/11/2015 7:48:00 AM

A wandering mind in words Andrea, James :)

Date: 4/8/2015 1:51:00 AM

Got a visual on that one...heard the sighs.

James Fraser
Date: 4/8/2015 2:02:00 PM

Many thanks MLK, glad you enjoyed this different take to the Limerick Form, smiles, James :)

Date: 4/8/2015 12:54:00 AM

Dino James, sultry! sultry!!!!//olive eloisa :D!

James Fraser
Date: 4/8/2015 2:01:00 PM

Sultry indeed, and so different to use the Limerick Form away from it's jovial naughty joking format. Mega hugs Oliz //Dino James// xx

Date: 4/7/2015 1:49:00 PM

Steamy! Bringing a limerick to the next level! A 7 from me

James Fraser
Date: 4/7/2015 2:04:00 PM

Thank you kindly Anna. Thought I'd try another angle to the Limerick Form. Glad you enjoyed, smiles, James :)