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When Our Shadows Melt

When life's lights goes out And death is crowned in shame When the clock's last tock halts And the shadows fade in sorrows When the last candle falls And my heart beats no more When you hear my voice no more And yet nowhere to trace me When the eternal gates shut close And you feel my breath not When the pictures paint my smiles And the inks write my words When you call me And hears my voice no more When I am laid lonely And no one ready to stay with me When you know I am no more And you have to move on with life When you know I love you But death separates us Patrick K. Atsu ©9/2/15

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Date: 2/16/2016 2:52:00 PM
PATRICK, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 2/19/2015 6:37:00 PM
Patrick:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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