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When No Star Shined

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When No Star Shined

Once, when no star shined
on slick, black, asphalt roads,
the murky wetness
of November's watered nights
a freedom-feeling and
strangeness-sense inspired.
The moisture lubricated
sluggish mental cogs that
all the dirty, dry, autumnal season
had rusted tight and atrophied.
Wildness no man can tell
I knew then.
All November's labored length
my nightly notions filled:
my bacchic spirit soared and flew,
traveled far, saw much in waking dream,
along a single street, wet
and splotched with light from cars
which coughed their fumes
as they passed my momentary immortality.
And now...
time has come when I no longer
feel delight to revel in the wildness
that I knew:
senses, now subordinate to sense,
defuse the spell
and November nights are merely

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  1. Date: 1/26/2012 4:42:00 PM
    senses, now subordinate to sense, defuse the spell at wisdom's true, yet memories still linger, only slightly dulled by the passage of time. Imagination still takes flight.

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 7:44:00 AM
    wow. I really enjoy the read of talented writers. To be pulled in at the opening of this piece and to be carried so well throughout the work takes a special skill that you show here. Very good work!