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When Night Brings Its Stillness, Silence and Tick, Tick, Tick

When Night Brings Its Stillness, Silence And Tick, Tick, Tick Collaboration with Robert Lindley 8th March 2019 Town was quiet, its heart barely beating midnight hour came and went so fast moon and stars blinked through open window silence echoed in the town's invisible pulse Strange how life gives night its powers its more peaceful and murmuring tones we that too oft wake to its untimely sounds feel crushing aches in our despairing souls Clock watching becomes our pride-less new sport with tick, tick, tick, its rallying calls and when that strain promises to explode we pray dawn's falling rays wakes world's all. We thought not to wake too soon yet feared we may not wake at all and tick, tick, tick, rhythm hypnotised us, we watched no clock, but listened a while, until it lulled our weary eyes to sleep; we woke uninvited, but unknowingly compelled, tones unheard would not have been peaceful and nights powers made us beg for our lives; the town purred with morbid contentment, moon and stars stroked its back, between midnight and dawn we writhed, the quiet town passively cursed us.

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Date: 3/31/2019 5:44:00 PM
Hello Lawrence, you both did a great jog creating this poemI am glad that this poem got to be PDO. have a nice evening my friend..
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 4/1/2019 1:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Darlene, visit and comments always enjoyed.
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Date: 4/1/2019 7:59:00 AM
Robert you did a great job on this poem. I am proud of both of you. have a nice day my friends.
Date: 3/12/2019 3:05:00 AM
Outstanding collaboration from the both of you Lawrence and Robert! So happy to see this poem honored with POTD! Congratulations! : )
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/12/2019 12:42:00 PM
Thank you very much, Connie, appreciated. To be fair, Robert deserves great credit here.
Date: 3/11/2019 9:47:00 AM
So good to see POTD given on our new collaboration my friend. Your verses floored me when I first read them and they carried on the poem in magnificent style!!! Always I have full faith in your writing abilities.. And give thanks that you honor me by writing with me.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/11/2019 10:55:00 AM
Again, my friend, thank you no end, and, as I've stated, the greater credit really must be yours.
Date: 3/11/2019 4:51:00 AM
Short and to the point, nicely done. Congrats on POTD. John
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/11/2019 10:55:00 AM
Thanks, John, appreciated.
Date: 3/10/2019 6:03:00 PM
Another impressive collaboration from you and Robert, wonderfully done! Congratulations for you both on your POTD honour. xomo
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 11:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Mo. Writing with Robert always inspires.
Date: 3/10/2019 3:59:00 PM
Congrats Lawrence!…Your POTD made my day.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 11:29:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie, good to see you, comments always well received.
Date: 3/10/2019 3:14:00 PM
Hi Lawrence, Congratulations to you both, for getting the poem of day. It was deserved:-) Alexis
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 11:28:00 PM
Thanks, Alexis, appreciated; great respect for Robert's mighty pen.
Date: 3/10/2019 2:54:00 PM
Congratulations to the both of you, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 11:26:00 PM
Thanks, Brandy, good to have you here, and good to be here again with Robert.
Date: 3/10/2019 2:42:00 PM
Weird, yet wonderfully descriptive of those sleepless nights when all we can do is feel restless and/or fearful about what the day will bring. Great collaboration! Congratulations on POTD to both of you. :D
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 11:25:00 PM
Thanks, Carole, very pleased if you enjoyed.
Date: 3/10/2019 2:08:00 PM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Lawrence :) -// Anne-Lise :)
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 2:31:00 PM
Thanks, SS, appreciated; great kudos to my writing partner.
Date: 3/10/2019 1:29:00 PM
Beautiful language! Oh could we stop worlds, at least shut them entirely down at will during such genuine intimacy; but stars constantly move and earths turn in their journeys--and we can but tamp them down somewhat. This is really an extraordinary collaboration. Great writing!
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 1:37:00 PM
Thanks, Joe; I have an extraordinary writing partner. Your words also very poetic, my friend. Appreciated.
Date: 3/10/2019 11:27:00 AM
Brilliant collaboration. I know all about those ticks... congrats on potd..
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Date: 3/10/2019 1:36:00 PM
Thanks, SO, commendations greatly appreciated, and a writing partner always highly valued.
Date: 3/10/2019 10:45:00 AM
The dynamic duo strike again!...Congrats!!! on POTD!!...love & light...^WW^
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 1:33:00 PM
Thanks,W's, appreciated; Robert's pen remains endlessly inspirational.
Date: 3/10/2019 10:17:00 AM
I wish I could say it so well. Those "between midnight and dawn" hours have not been better described, I think. Congratulations!
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 1:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sunlite, very pleased that you enjoyed.
Date: 3/10/2019 7:39:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 8:36:00 AM
Thank you, Heidi, very kind.
Date: 3/10/2019 7:36:00 AM
Congrats on POTD!
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much, Agnes, appreciated.
Date: 3/10/2019 7:29:00 AM
Back with congrats my friend on poem of the day.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 8:34:00 AM
Thanks again Vijay, second visit really appreciated.
Date: 3/10/2019 6:52:00 AM
Imagine " tick tick tick" in empty silence...Congratulations Lawrence and Robert...Keep the collaboration coming...
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 8:32:00 AM
Thanks very much, Arturo; Robert's pen always inspires.
Date: 3/10/2019 6:48:00 AM
An amazing collaboration from two very skilled and talented hands. Love the content of this poem. Congratulations Lawrence and Robert on your very well deserved POTD. Best wishes to both...Charlie
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 8:31:00 AM
Thanks, Charles, your encouragement is always very well received, my friend.
Date: 3/10/2019 4:04:00 AM
Brilliant collaboration Lawrence and Robert. A well deserved POTD honour. Tom.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 6:46:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, appreciated; great credit to Robert.
Date: 3/9/2019 10:39:00 PM
dea lawrence and robert, a night of quietude well portrayed from your spilled ink...you make beautiful poetry together!...huggs
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 12:01:00 AM
Thanks, Nette, appreciated, glad you enjoyed.
Date: 3/9/2019 6:29:00 PM
Hi Lawrence, this is another exceptional poem by Robert and yourself. I do love free verse poems for they can be limitless. You have both used the full scope of this form. I love the silence of the night, although many are the times that melancholy thoughts can assail me. Many are the times that I lie awake, just looking into the darkness, just wanting, praying for sleep to take me into its embrace. I love the content of this write. A fave. have a wonderful Sunday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/9/2019 11:59:00 PM
Thanks, Mike, appreciated, very good to see you again. Your comment, by the way, is a very poetic expression in and of itself; truly enjoyed.
Date: 3/8/2019 9:52:00 PM
Perhaps the night and what cannot be seen, is frightening. To some!! While others allow the distant silence- even the ticking of the clock to soothe them. I am sure you can guess which one I am. :) Deep and powerful are your words. Wonderful collaboration. ~ Brandy
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/9/2019 12:20:00 AM
Thanks, Branderz, always good to have you here, and always a pleasure to write with Robert.
Date: 3/8/2019 11:33:00 AM
The sights and sounds of the night so well depicted in your poem..its silence and uneasiness that is ever so powerful. Kudos to you both for this splendid collaboration Lawrence and Robert. Well done..you are the best.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/9/2019 12:18:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay, great inspiration from Robert, as always. Very glad you enjoyed.
Date: 3/8/2019 10:33:00 AM
Thank you my dear friend for composing this poem with me. Always an honor to write with you. I know each time you will gift exceptional verse to enhance and magnify the started piece. Your verses never fail in awing me and so very truly appreciated. ..
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/8/2019 11:27:00 AM
Thank you, my friend, another collaboration very greatly enjoyed.

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