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When Nature Speaks

Two hearts beside thee such warmth ready to explode captured we will be ~ Above the event melded souls meet combustion reciprocated ~ In their aftermath natures now vociferous have two hearts spoken? .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/29/2015 10:25:00 PM
Once again thank you for the reply...LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2015 6:23:00 PM
hey this was really good, James. Glad to see it got a top spot. Congrats to you.
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James Fraser
Date: 3/25/2015 1:30:00 PM
Hiya Andrea, many thanks. I so loved writing this poem, James :)
Date: 3/24/2015 3:16:00 PM
I am so sorry I missed this James it was posted at the time dad went into hopsice - congrats on your well deserved top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 3/24/2015 3:31:00 PM
Hope the hearts continue to beat in perfect harmony:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Fraser
Date: 3/24/2015 3:26:00 PM
Hiya Jan, no worries girl, you had so much on your mind then. I loved writing this poem as it means so much to me ;-) // hugs // James xx
Date: 3/23/2015 6:18:00 PM
James, congratulations on your win with this awesome poem, well done, a perfect 7 . . .
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James Fraser
Date: 3/24/2015 3:20:00 PM
Thank you so much Broken Wings, much appreciated, James :) :)
Date: 3/22/2015 10:35:00 PM
BIG CONGRATULATIONS huge James.. :D! weeeeeee treat! treat! :D! //olive eloisa
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James Fraser
Date: 3/24/2015 2:56:00 PM
Okies little one, my treat then :-) Tell me what you'd like for your treat ;-) is it hugs of many on natures breeze, over mountains and many seas. Soon to land on Oliz's shore, hugs aplenty plus 20 score ;-) your Dino James xxxx
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Date: 3/24/2015 1:35:00 AM
:P I'll not be the one to treat you,:D as you place higher than me.. :D! hahahahah :P
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James Fraser
Date: 3/23/2015 3:04:00 PM
Thank you little one, weeeeeee treat me soon, hugs 4U // Dino James xxxx
Date: 3/22/2015 3:19:00 PM
Combustion propelled you into first place, James! Excellent set of haiku! Merited congratulations to you! // paul
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James Fraser
Date: 3/23/2015 2:37:00 PM
Thank you kindly Paul for your always kind words. I loved penning this poem. A blessed evening to you and yours // James :)
Date: 3/22/2015 1:42:00 PM
James, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA
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James Fraser
Date: 3/23/2015 2:21:00 PM
Hiya Linda, thank you so much for this late Valentine surprise. Wow, I'm smiling so much as this poem means a lot to me. Many hugs for you, James :) :)
Date: 2/22/2015 9:27:00 PM
Combustion -- heat, love and light -- these are what makes two hearts sing!! Well done James. 7 Need to write and post again soon.
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James Fraser
Date: 2/26/2015 2:43:00 PM
Thank you kindly David, indeed, two hearts sang. Have a lovely afternoon, evening, James :)
Date: 2/20/2015 7:57:00 PM
Your title goes so well with your write, James. i love that last one. Two hearts HAVE spoken thru your poetry.
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James Fraser
Date: 2/21/2015 4:10:00 AM
Hiya Andrea, indeed two hearts speak as one. Have a blessed weekend, James :) :)
Date: 2/18/2015 9:16:00 AM
This write my poetic friend, after an indepth reading, is for sure a climatic event unfolded before your readers ! And I enjoyed your celebration of accomplishment using this beautiful form to express your adulation fine sir ! Thanx for this awesome read James. Have a wonderful week........much love, james
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James Fraser
Date: 2/21/2015 2:59:00 AM
Hiya James, how are you and Noah? Thanks kindly as always for your lovely comments, they indeed make me smile widely. Glad you liked this little piece as it has meaning for me. A blessed weekend to you Sir, your Scottish Poetry friend, James :)
Date: 2/9/2015 3:05:00 AM
Indeed they have! Beautifully done.
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James Fraser
Date: 2/21/2015 2:57:00 AM
Thank you MLK, nature has spoken. Have a lovely weekend, James :)
Date: 2/7/2015 3:25:00 PM
My arthritis hands won't form a heart-shaped cup anymore but this one paints a heart in love..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the encouraging uplifting comment..I am glad that you see some improvement in my work..I have been learning but not perfect in means of the word..I want to do better and better with each work that I write..Sara
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James Fraser
Date: 2/7/2015 3:35:00 PM
Hey girl, nobody's perfect all of the time. Nobody's perfect we are what we are ( Mike & the Mechanics ) listen Sara ;-) xx - much hugs to you always, James xxxx
Date: 2/6/2015 5:06:00 AM
the first set is my fave among the rest.. :)! weeeeee, if two hearts want to be, they will speak.. :)! --olive eloisa
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James Fraser
Date: 2/7/2015 2:59:00 PM
Look inside my mind, to what I've written about. Simply read between my lines, then, let it shout out. Trust me my words are there, to never let you stare. If you know me like you do, when nature speaks, you'll view - hugs, James xx
Date: 2/5/2015 8:13:00 PM
Excellent pen James! I enjoyed your haiku suit my dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a lovely day! In His Light! :)Love n hugs! xxx D."
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James Fraser
Date: 2/7/2015 2:36:00 PM
It has a theme and meaning from my past recent poems, seek and ye shall find. Hugs always Dorian, James xx

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