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When Missing a Love One

She takes her ways so seriously. He takes everything so hesitantly. Both shared their lives since childhood. Both were not misunderstood. Their lives did not get complicated. And so they decided to be dedicated. They became close and very happy. Her memory of growing up is so sappy. He took the time to comb her hair. She took time to be there. She took a trip for a week. He was emotionally weak. Being away for the first time ever became a bother. Both of them were not meant for other. She was not home she felt not right. He saw that she was full of new insight. Their feeling becomes true. They both said at the same time I love you. She said she cried almost each night. He said that he was waiting with a light. She said she looked at the moon. He said I hope she comes home soon. Finally she came back. She said he showed his emotions with no lack. He said she said that she missed him and longingly. She said he said that he was so lonely. The final word is not words it’s just the look in her eyes. And I know it is not any look that says good byes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/29/2011 1:01:00 PM
so enjoyed reading this touching write so emotional Reynaldo.. super one..luv..
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Date: 5/29/2011 11:49:00 AM
Rey, I'm think the sound of tears will dry.. great poem... keep the sun on your mind.. take care,.. Linda
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