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When Marbles Fall

When Marbles Fall Happy are the children on the wall of time Playing marbles by the castle keep Soldiers watch them secure that they won’t climb But become bored and fall to sleep The children are not children at all But spies that cry for freedom They slay the soldiers in a modest brawl The king is next to fall to lose his kingdom Fate takes the king with a confidant to towers top Spies follow them to that end It is there where all of this must stop The king must die but first his friend Marble in this upper room is splendid King marvels for one last time his acquisitions Too bad right here and now he must end it To simply die without his royalties permission Created 7/12/14 for- Not Just Any Old Quatrain contest

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Date: 7/29/2014 2:19:00 PM
Hi Linda. Good to hear from you. Thanks. I'm new to the form myself but it was fun to create. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
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Date: 7/29/2014 1:55:00 PM
Earl, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:30:00 PM
Big congrats on your win!!
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:03:00 PM
Hi Robert, Thanks! Congratulations to you too on your win. Your poem was a nice romantic entry. Take care. Earl
Date: 7/28/2014 11:21:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, Earl my friend!.. Love poems about the era of kings and castles.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/28/2014 12:37:00 PM
Hi Arlene, Thanks! Congratulations to you too. You had a very nice entry. Your poem was very relaxing and soothing. I wish I was out at sea. Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate it very much. Have a great day....No....Have thousands and millions! Take care. Earl
Date: 7/28/2014 8:59:00 AM
Well penned tale Earl ! Congrats on merited big win
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:07:00 AM
Hi Dr. Sharma. Thank you so much. I just finished reading your poem. Congratulations on your well thought out entry and win. It was very deep and thought provoking. Earl
Date: 7/28/2014 1:22:00 AM
A nice tale well told, Earl. congrats
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:01:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta. Thank you. Congratulations to you too for your win. Your poem was very well crafted. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 7/28/2014 12:15:00 AM
A tale of history. Congratulations on your poem and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:17:00 AM
Good afternoon Joyce. Thanks! Congratulations are in order for you as well. Your contest entry was uplifting and well done. Take care. Earl
Date: 7/27/2014 9:08:00 PM
Your story took me back in time a bit, and I love when a poem can do that! Very nice work, Earl! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2014 9:22:00 AM
Hi Kelly. Thank you so much for your kind words and for sponsoring the contest. I see you received some great works from great people. I'm glad you liked my little entry. Have a great day. Take care. Earl

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