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When Love Reckons For a Second Time

You swept me away into the depths of our own island, I was young and in love yet craved independence for my life- Six years passed and you offered me a beautiful diamond, for you had always longed for me to be your beloved wife. R e l e a s e your youth to him… maybe it's meant to be…. Returning a sacred gift was the hardest thing I’ve had to do, I spent nights wondering if I had made the right choice- I moved far away and thought it would be easy to forget you, but without my soulmate my spoken verses had no voice. R e l e a s e him like a butterfly… if he comes back it was meant to be… I just couldn’t stay away too long before I thirsted for your adoration, my desire became an obsession I had to go find you once again- I ran as fast as I could to somehow give you a realistic explanation, for you have always been the line to my life, my intimate best friend. R e l e a s e your trust to him… let’s pray it’s meant to be… I wrote a short verse with a yellow rose and down on bended knee, I promised my dedication and proposed with promised loyalty- I cried…you cried…for you always were so in love with no one but me, and I am so blessed to have always been treated like deserving royalty. R e l e a s e your heart to him... it was definitely meant to be… I came back to you, you accepted me with nothing but loving open arms, we swore vows under oath to the Lord I’d be yours, you’d always be mine- In each other’s embrace we will always feel safe and free from any harm, for true love became destiny when our love reckoned for the second time. ***This is a true story about me and my hubby. He proposed to me after 6 years of dating. I was 21 and so young. I returned the ring, moved out of state then realized he was my soulmate after all. So I proposed to him this time. Happily married for almost 14 years :)*** Date Written: August 24, 2016

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Date: 9/1/2016 5:28:00 AM
I'm glad this won:) Very deserving:) Congratulations on your win:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/1/2016 2:54:00 PM
thank you lovely Jo :)-luloo
Date: 9/1/2016 4:30:00 AM
I knew in my heart, this poem is going to top the chart. Congratulations, Laura.
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Date: 9/1/2016 2:53:00 PM
thank you Afzal :) Hey you rhymed! lol :)-luloo
Date: 8/31/2016 11:32:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Laura - May you remain as happy as what your poem reflects. Stunning, amazing write. A well desrved win. Mark
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/1/2016 2:53:00 PM
Mark Paul...thank you for your kind comment, it made me smile and I know we will remain so much in love forever. I was 16 when we met, now I'm 36. 20 years with the same man is better than me being 75 years old with 2 husbands. I am so blessed! And will always write in gratitude because of it...many thanks :)-luloo
Date: 8/31/2016 3:52:00 PM
I'd give above 7 if I could for this beautiful, skillfully-written WINNING poem! Congrats on your top win, Luloo. Janice
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/31/2016 9:41:00 PM
many thanks lovely Janice :)-luloo
Date: 8/31/2016 3:52:00 PM
Such a beautiful love story, Laura. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/31/2016 9:41:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 8/31/2016 3:29:00 PM
Laura, a beautiful and touching true love story. Congratulations on your First Placement. Thank you for sharing such a romantic poem of your life. ~ Sonia
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/31/2016 3:47:00 PM
awww thank you very much sweet Sonia :)-luloo
Date: 8/31/2016 2:53:00 PM
Very well written, with your thoughts interspersed between verses, very well constructed, with beautiful lines and flow, very worthy winner! You are in the zone, wow!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/31/2016 3:46:00 PM
thank you John :)-luloo
Date: 8/31/2016 2:18:00 PM
Lovely to know this is a true story! When it is the right time, what is meant to be will be the right thing to do. Congratulations on your marriage, and your win in the contest!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/31/2016 3:46:00 PM
many thanks lovely Carrie :)-luloo
Date: 8/31/2016 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the first placement of the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/31/2016 3:45:00 PM
thank you so much Nayda :) I am so grateful you enjoyed it :)-luloo
Date: 8/31/2016 6:39:00 AM
Oh, Wow!!! Such a wonderful nice romance you've had:) I love the two lines interspersed in between:) Such a beauty:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/31/2016 3:45:00 PM
thank you Jo :)-luloo

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