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When Light Moved In

There was an odd man who lived in the dark, who was too stubborn to open his eyes. The world that surrounds him, he had no part, and only to himself did he confide. But as time went on he became lonely, and he longed for the voice of someone else. To have a companion, his thought only, to give to another and share of himself. Then out of the blue he gets a new neighbor, when a lovely lady moves in next door. Then he soon found himself all in favor, of meeting the one, he would come to adore. He knocked at her door, and their eyes met. It was love at first sight and head over heels. All of his loneliness he would soon forget, when she shared the same love that he feels. Now the odd man has become more even, since he became a part of a pair. When the light moved in, the dark left grieving, and the world around him, he was happy to share. 11 /2/18

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Date: 12/11/2018 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer for your kind words. I hope this holiday season finds you surrounded by those you love. Have a wonderful day my friend.
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Date: 12/11/2018 10:26:00 AM
A very sweet love story Wren. A love destined to be - a love that unexpectedly came your came and one which you embraced with both arms. Beautifully penned, Best wishes , Jennifer.
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Date: 11/3/2018 1:21:00 PM
Love can move mountains, as well as the stubborn heart of an odd man who lived in the dark. How beautiful that his love light finally shined with happiness that banished the lonely dark. A wonderful and inspiring love story, Wren. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/3/2018 3:22:00 PM
You are right Susan love can do some amazing things. Thank you and have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 11/2/2018 2:44:00 PM
The title is appropriately telling, as you went from dark to light easily and completely. Great job, Wren!
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/2/2018 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Caren
Date: 11/2/2018 2:15:00 PM
awww such a sweet love story! "When the light moved in the dark left..."
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Wren Rushing
Date: 11/2/2018 5:38:00 PM
Thank you p.s

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