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When Less Is More

Technology is changing day by day, the benefits? enormous, one might say, is miniaturization a price too high to pay? not necessarily the smart and prudent way. Gemstones aren't what they're purported to be, take that cuff link, a microprocessor, what used to take acres and acres of space now resides on the top of his dresser. Tie clips and navel rings, earrings with studs contain microchips too small to see, snapshots are routed to secret computers, surveillance directed at you and at me. As fate would have it, I have diminished, a 6 footer, now 2ft 4inches, soon I'll be able to date a REAL 'bird' and cavort with the crows and the finches! It must be my penance, I spoke out of turn and maligned the creator, the hedonist, who pleasures the masses with tablets and iPods, and removed me from his Merry Christmas list. Small is as small does so I gravitate, and follow these micro-bit players, I am so tiny, can hardly be seen, as black widows become midget-slayers. Confined to my basement I look for a way to escape my arachnoid aggressors, I squeeze through a slit in the mesh at my window and plead, as with all good confessors. Out in my garden I stare at the stars, just a minuscule speck in the firmament, and wonder how I might reverse my misfortune, not suffer the lot of the helpless and spent. It's much too late now to redress my transgressions, so I must make do with my life as it stands, and hope when I shrink 'til no vestige is left of me He will be present to welcome me home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/2/2015 6:31:00 PM
Oh my, if you've published a poetry book I would love to own a copy! You are a one and only Keith.:) Today I recieved an email in the junk part of my mail, but when I'd seen the word Keith as the address, I sent it to my inbox for sure.:) The address is not the same.:( Sounds like you, Keith.."No sweeter voice was ever heard oer hilly path and open strath i gave you shelter Slippst into thy shelterd hold?"??? Beautiful as with your style. Anyhow, Happy Easter!!!!! Love, Mikki
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 4/3/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thanks SO MUCH for your delightful comments, and no, that is not me... though I wish it were! Happy Easter to you too, Love Keith
Date: 3/9/2014 9:47:00 AM
The mind, the style, the point is back. "A minuscule speck' indeed. Bravo. Love Kathy.
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Date: 3/7/2014 10:46:00 PM
Isn't it crazy how fast this world is changing...I'm for indoor plumbing...maybe..and AC....but could still live without..I have before.:-) :-) but the stars don't change and the sun and moon and who created that! Great stuff Keith....
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