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When Leaves Turn Red

When leaves turn red, we call them dead But they are just reposing I think they hate it when we say That they are decomposing They stay around on Fall's damp ground Until the first snows fly They share their crunching, crackly noise Before they say good bye And every leaf knows every other And from what tree it bloomed Their time is short and they don't know When they will meet their doom Some years they fall with sudden speed Some years they hang on longer But leaves are smart, they always know That spring will make them stronger The word goes out, the sun is high And all the leaves re-bloom The trees and all the earthly plants Will sing a different tune

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/23/2009 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Patricia and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 2:03:00 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Patricia! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 11:36:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 10/23/2009 10:08:00 AM
Dear Patricia, Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry with us this week. Lainie
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Date: 10/19/2009 9:34:00 PM
mother nature must be smiling at you now. :-) loved the simplicity and the warmth it gives my heart. Thanks :-)
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured! It's Wonderful! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/19/2009 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 10/19/2009 9:33:00 AM
Great imagery here, Patricia. Native Americans call trees Standing People and I like to think of fall as them showing off and then making way for the new in the spring. Love this write you've done and congratulations on its feature this week here at the Soup!!
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Date: 10/18/2009 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Patricia. Love, Carol
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