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When it rains.. Washes away all the filth The grass will be greener on the other side New day to make up for any guilt When its sunny... Birds fly high Kangaroos jump about Want to be outside but I'll sigh from the window at my desk

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:06:00 PM

SharonStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Lynn Dolly
Date: 11/21/2012 8:17:00 PM

I never mind hearing from you! You are a wonderful poet and I'm thankful to have met you :) Have a wonderful Thanksgiving!

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/23/2012 6:16:00 PM

why sigh,such a beautiful scene,love the rain but right now Jamaica is in the middle of Hurricane Sadie,love your comment on my poem,read a little more see if the flow catches you lol,nice write Sharon

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/23/2012 8:39:00 PM

And oh my..I'd never wish for a hurricane, just the occasional rain that can apparently can create water babies with sprinklers:)

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/23/2012 8:27:00 PM

I'd only sigh because I can't be outside jumping with kangaroos! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/23/2012 2:06:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today Sharon. Love, Carol

Lynn Dolly
Date: 10/24/2012 10:15:00 PM

Thank you!