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When It All Began

You look at me And I wonder if you see what I see All the flaws and imperfections I wonder why I'm the choice of your affection But then again apparently Your no good for me But i love you So what's my choice Besides id rather listen to my hearts voice You hold my hand and my heart As i think of how are love came to a start Me looking for an escape From the pain and memories that haunted me And you knew it to "You walk with the pain on your shoulders" And suddenly you seemed so much older You knew and cared back then You weren't even my friend And i found out You loved me that day too And thought if only you knew I hope that you my friend know my love will never end because I knew when it all began

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/9/2009 8:15:00 AM
Very nicely done.Thank you for your comments.Hope all is well.
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Date: 12/9/2009 6:14:00 AM
Ariel, lovely poem about your love. Thank you for your comment. Robert
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Date: 12/8/2009 9:26:00 PM
nicely said.Thank you for the comment.I am glad you liked it.
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