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When I’m in Heaven

I think when I’m in heaven, I’ll put my feet on a soft cloud. Pour some Tennessee whisky, and read poetry to the crowd. I’ll hug my dad a few times, I’ll kiss my mom on both her cheeks. Sit at the kitchen table, eat her good cooking for two weeks. I’ll walk those dusty backroads, won’t care about the summer heat. I’ll play tag and kick the can, right in the middle of the street. Maybe I’ll help as momma, hangs our clothes outside on the line. And listen to her singing, “Old Rugged Cross” just one more time. Perhaps I’ll join my father, listen to coon hounds running free. Laying on the grass watching, soft clouds floating on a cool breeze. Walk a few acres of beans, then buck a thousand bales of hay. Or head to Wakenda Creek, sit on the bank, and fish all day. So, when I’m dead and gone, dear, please don’t shed any tears for me. Just take my body’s ashes, and spread me neath that old oak tree. Take me back to Wakenda, back to that place where I was born. Carry me up that big hill, let me see fields of wheat and corn. Let me watch the birds and clouds, drifting through that Wakenda sky. Like I did in those old times, before life went too quickly by. When you come to the graveside, and see my name carved on the stone. Know that I am happy dear, and I shall never be alone.

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Date: 1/2/2024 8:08:00 PM
Sounds idyllic to me, Jerry. I'll contact you from Hell, if the devil lets us have a Wi-fi connection. lol. ~ gw
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/4/2024 6:59:00 PM
Dial-up only I hear.
Date: 1/2/2024 3:23:00 PM
poignant and positive words, Jerry. I, too, would like to have my ashes buried where my childhood home is, underneath the plum trees...the ones that bore enough fruit that every year mother & I made plum jelly...can still taste it. I'd like to walk the neighborhood streets with my dad reliving simpler times. Have to fave this for it touched my heart! thank you, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:22:00 PM
Thanks, Sara. I think, for most of us, our childhood home only gets better with each memory. Apple butter was my favorite.
Date: 1/2/2024 3:00:00 PM
We share a lot. I baled hay for 2 dollers an hour. picked enough peas to..... Those hunting dogs lived under the house. And we had 365 acers to explore. When we spent summers at Grandmas.
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:20:00 PM
We got two cents a bale and thought we were rich. Two bucks an hour for walking beans. I have 14 brothers and sisters and our stomping ground was most of Carrol County, MO.
Date: 1/2/2024 8:05:00 AM
I love your positive outlook Jerry and I hope to see you up there. Tom
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:17:00 PM
But not too soon, my friend.
Date: 1/2/2024 7:46:00 AM
So beautiful! I have tears and an ache in my soul, too, as I think of my Mom. I would love one of her hugs. When she first died, I dreamt I was sitting in the back of a car. I couldn’t see her but she grabbed my hand (with her always soft) hand(s) and squeezed mine. I woke up. Happy New Year, dear Jerry. A fave for me!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:16:00 PM
I am so pleased that I was able to spark some treasured memories. Have a blessed day, Kim.
Date: 1/2/2024 6:47:00 AM
Brother Jerry what can l truly say….Well…..this poem is utterly amazing ! It is beautiful, sad with a touch of Jerry humour and for me a very comforting poem ! I find so many of your poems comforting….they make me feel good! I understand, relate and honestly love the way you write and your humour….l know l have said it before but your poetry is real, honest with no BS. You are one of my favourite poets…Sister Debx
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Date: 1/2/2024 6:40:00 AM
I feel the same as you, but what if we end up in hell? Will we get a chance to put our feet up.. or what if there is no heaven or hell and above us only sky.. ok went a bit deep.. nice poem Jerry..
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/2/2024 7:14:00 PM
Just imagine, my friend. Have a fantastic day, Silent One.

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