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When I'M Feeling Blue

When I’m feeling blue, I look at the picture of you, Smiling back at me, It changes my mood easily. When I’m feeling blue, I write a poem about a view, Describing a beautiful scenery, My heart is satisfied and happy. When I’m feeling blue, I eat my food so slow, But when I finished my meal, My problems is not a big deal. November 16, 2013 For SKAT's BLUE-feeling blue or color blue (old/new poem) Contest 5th Place Winner

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Date: 1/19/2014 10:50:00 AM
Wonderful and interesting piece,Maria...Congrats on your win...
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Date: 1/18/2014 6:43:00 PM
nice one, Maria. Congratulations for your win.
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Date: 11/22/2013 11:39:00 AM
lovely positive poetry
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Date: 11/17/2013 11:47:00 AM
ohh, so poignantly expressed... i hope this is not really happening, paz.. your poetry shines today; so well done!...:) huggs
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Date: 11/17/2013 9:48:00 AM
An excellently sweet poem this is my dear friend Maria. I hope you're not feeling blue today and your appetite is good. Biggest hugs to you from me on this very beautiful and wonderful write. Good luck in the contest my dear friend. TYSM for sharing & your inspiring/ congratulatory comments on my poems. love much, Leonora
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Date: 11/17/2013 5:08:00 AM
Excellent. Very touching write. Enjoyed. Tfs
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Date: 11/17/2013 1:35:00 AM
I like how well you portrayed feeling blue. Good entry for PD.
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Date: 11/16/2013 1:43:00 PM
A touching and sad poem Maria. - Hope you are not feeling blue today. - Good luck in the contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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