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When I'M Down

Remembering the sky yesterday, the blueness in color, warm winds bringing back times of summers years ago. Clouds lofting above, as if passing through another time. When I'm down, I'd like to hitch a ride on a cloud. Taking me up and away, floating above my troubles, putting me away from my enemies

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Date: 11/24/2016 8:18:00 PM
When I'm down, I'd like to hitch a ride on a cloud. Taking me up and away, floating above my troubles, Heartwarming poem..... Congrats on being featured...
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Date: 11/24/2016 4:19:00 PM
Tucker, wonderful write and congratulations on having it selected as a Featured Poem of the week.
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