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When I Will Be Gone

When I will be gone Memories will reflect in mirror of mind If at all in life you feel I were kind, Nothing ever put in a secret box True feelings not meant to end in hoax, Poetry books that must have gathered dust, Shall unfold your favourite flower must, Petals dried up in moments of sublime, As fragrance of youth lies frozen in time, Loneliness deepens with evening cries of cricket If in heavens I could send you a plane ticket, Midnight blues and the wake up bell, When cravings rise, should we burn in hell? Written Jan 3rd, 2016 For contest "Combination of three words" by Laura loo Chosen combination #3 Awarded 2nd place win

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Date: 2/16/2016 9:20:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma, i know not of the contest so i can just take your poem as a write and as such itis an excellent piece. The rhyme and flow are consistent and the words sing as i say. You have let the heart sing in this write. An excellent write. A 7 from me.
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:16:00 AM
Wonderful write which would sit well (Imo) with those written by Victorian Poet 'Christina Rossetti'.
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:45:00 AM
Amazing the excellence that can come from three phrases..Congrats on your winning phrases..Sara
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Upma for winning in the combination of 3 words contest! You deserve the win! :) -hans
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Date: 1/10/2016 11:05:00 PM
Hello Dr Upma, Congratulations on your win. Always ~LINDA~ .... :)
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Date: 1/5/2016 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your combined win!
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Date: 1/4/2016 10:20:00 AM
DR UPMA, CONGRATS on your "Combination of Three Words WIN!" *SKAT*
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:30:00 AM
Congrats on your poetic win, Upma!
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:01:00 AM
Congrats on your placement in my contest and thank you for your participation! A lovely write..:)-luloo
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:33:00 AM
so very moving Doc! excellent imagery in this piece, it's a little dark coming from you my friend:), I really enjoyed your rawness! Best of luck.., jill
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