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When I Was Younger

When I was younger I would wish my brother to death Today, I love him to death When I was younger God wasnt even a thought in my head Now I think of him everynight before I go to bed When I was younger I would cry for hours at a time Now I don't think I've cried since i was the age of nine When I was younger I wished for every toy I could see Today I wish for grades higher than a 90 When I was younger I thought my parents would live forever Today I wish I'm not alive to bury my mother Never thought of sex, rsce, or politics..Ha I thought the gayest was the color pink Wow! its so crazy..... what i used to think

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Date: 10/2/2010 10:23:00 PM
Well-expressed truths, Freddy...quite often, one can tell when poetry comes from the heart. I enjoyed this very much! Thanks for sharing it. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:19:00 AM
Very creative with nice inner thoughts well penned, Freddy
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Date: 10/1/2010 6:03:00 PM
good write!! flows like smooth milk in hot coffee! good to the last drop!
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Date: 10/1/2010 5:30:00 PM
wow, nice write on when you were younger, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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