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When I Was Ten

I had a doll that could close its eyes, “Don’t show it to others.” was a friend’s advice. Covering notebooks was an important mission; it had to be done before submission. Extremely delightful and lovely days, never knew that would only be a phase. Let’s go back in nineteen eighty four, when no tears, only smiles we wore. Vacations were absolute sensation; leaving station was a real temptation. Endless world of immature fashion, 'kumkum bindi' was just an addition. Wearing 'saree' was my passion, who cared for momma’s permission. No one was allowed break rules, When, we played ‘Schools-schools’. My favorite game was one leg race, for my pace had some grace. Pinning a Tricolor was a pride, 'Vande Mataram' we loudly cried. Playing Cricket was real fun, though companion I had only one. All of us governed a star or two, aliens! We called them ‘Dru’. Hopscotch was no big deal; it always gave us an active feel. 'Roohafza' was the coolest drink; I could finish it in a blink. Fleeing after ringing a bell, then hiding into a nearby shell. How I wish to make way back then, when I was ten. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- *A bindi, meaning "point, drop or dot " is a red dot worn on the center of the forehead, commonly by Hindu women. @Saree is a garment consisting of a length of cotton or silk elaborately draped around the body, traditionally worn by women from South Asia. #Tricolor: The National Flag of India is a horizontal rectangular tricolour of deep saffron, white andIndia green; with the Ashoka Chakra, a 24-spoke wheel, in navy blue at its centre. **Vande Mataram is the national song of India. ##Rooh Afza is a non-alcoholic concentrated squash. It is still the most popular drink in India. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: 27/01/2016 For the contest: Way Back Then When I Was Ten Sponsored by: Kelly Deschler

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Date: 8/6/2016 1:02:00 AM
Very nice.... Congratulations
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Date: 2/20/2016 9:23:00 AM
Hi Archana: Thank you for a beautiful poem and the cultural information.
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written, organized look back into your childhood. I thoroughly enjoyed!
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:37:00 AM
Archana, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:32:00 AM
delicately constructed, archana.. congrats on your placement!..huggs
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Date: 2/16/2016 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations, Archana,Your memories are precious and your still a baby. Ok, young one. Thank you for sharing your memories and bless each one. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:32:00 PM
Some nice childhood memories you've written about here... Congrats on a win with this great poem! Thanks for entering, Archana :)
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Date: 2/7/2016 11:17:00 AM
A very sweet poem to read and enjoy. I am also Indian and admire saree as an elegant dress Wish you best for the contest. Anisha D
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Date: 1/31/2016 8:27:00 PM
ahhh, this was so fun to read about your sweet childhood at age ten. Different than american one but in some ways the same.
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Date: 1/31/2016 8:27:00 PM
love the form this poem took too.
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