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When I Was Ten

Away back then, when I was ten, Was truly a long time ago. I was a child, still running wild, And of troubles I didn't know. World War One had been fought And our freedom bought, When I was a child of ten. With the war to end all wars ended, We'd never see war again. Innocently, I laughed and played. There was nothing of which I was afraid. We ran in the sun and we slid in the snow, We liked to see our gardens grow. The year was Nineteen Twenty Eight, When I swung so hard on the garden gate And laughed because I was finally ten And would never be younger than ten again. Written: 01/23/2016

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Date: 2/20/2016 8:59:00 AM
Congratulations, Joyce: You have come a long way.
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Date: 2/18/2016 11:16:00 AM
Ahhh Joyce! I really enjoyed reading this one. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 2/17/2016 9:25:00 AM
Joyce, Congratulations on your nice win. LINDA
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Date: 2/17/2016 8:21:00 AM
such a descriptive piece, joyce.. all the best with my congrats and huggs
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Date: 2/17/2016 5:55:00 AM
I enjoyed this look into your past, Joyce. Congratulations.
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Date: 2/16/2016 9:59:00 PM
Such lovely memories they are. Congratulations on your win and thank you for sharing your treasured memories. Bless your memories and Peace. With memories like that, you can be ten anytime you want. SMILES
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Date: 2/16/2016 8:55:00 PM
Some lovely memories, Joyce and many that we all share from our own childhoods... Congrats on a win with this great poem! Thanks for entering, Joyce :)
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Date: 1/26/2016 9:33:00 PM
A lovely poem, Joyce! Janice
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:36:00 PM
What a beautiful and carefree poem Joyce.
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Date: 1/25/2016 7:16:00 AM
Put so eloquently, Joyce. I love your poem.
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Date: 1/24/2016 6:39:00 PM
OH, I enjoyed the swing on the garden gate with you. Enjoyed your poem. BG
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