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When I Was Married I Was Not Allowed To Be Online 15 Hours a Day

When one has a new beginning or new start without the kids or wife, He will begin to see a spiraling down fall of what became of his life. She cracked that whip on how much time was allowed on the net, He looks around the house and sees the mess he allowed for it to get. The kids and wife kept him busy and kept him physically healthy and fit, After he left her then his life became somewhat of a mess and a bit of a pit. A weight gain then happened from spending to much time alone you see, To pursue things he enjoyed that were not allowed before to happen or be.

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Date: 4/10/2011 5:43:00 PM
i think many physical changes can happen between let us say dec florida and july donuts LOL i dont think it was only donuts..but sitting around and not allowed to before LOL...how does one sit around with three kids...separate islands too? worse move someone could have made..let me be alone as possible so i can have so much freedom that i effected my own health..
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Date: 4/10/2011 5:26:00 PM
double standard? not understanding...I think what happens is when someone wanted to be writing online multiple hours a day..they could not do it..it can keep your weight down, running after kids, going out with your kids etc..burns calories..I hardly see middle of the night jaunts online often when married..I am sure a wife would crack the wip...my family keeps my weight down..going out daily etc..
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Date: 4/10/2011 4:38:00 PM
wow this poem is double standard and you tell it from both sides. That takes a very talented person....thanks, Judy
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