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When I Was In Love

When I was in love my heart was light. You made the day feel a lot more bright. When we would gaze into each others eyes, I could actually see yours glisten. I would sit quiet and just let my heart listen. For sometimes your look is all that it takes to make my heart pound and my hands shake. Deep inside of me a feeling has grown. With hugging and kissing only a crush is shown. You gave me happiness, the kind I needed each day. if sometimes I didnt let it show I loved you in each and every way. The times we shared together brought us much closer than i thought. Alot of ways we are the same yet we are not. At one time we were so close but at the same time so far apart. Babe you know its true you'll forever share my heart. Each day I think of you alone, so young in the mind if only I had known. I hear your laughter and imagine your smile while fooling myself it will just be a while. Inside I feel all of my mistakes, maybe you were a dream so soon I will awake. i cant stand the thought of you being with somebody else. Maybe Im being greedy but ive got to have your love all to myself. At one time I thought we would always last. now my friends say forget him hes in the past. You wouldnt talk to me even if I tried. you think I didnt care but i really cried and cried. Though life is long and many loves we both may come to fine. None will ever be the same to me as yours and mine. i hope someday we can talk again to give our love a better end. i wish you happiness in future years. i will think of you and cry more tears.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/13/2016 11:20:00 PM
Tanya, nice to see this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 12:40:00 PM
Hi Tanya,, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT"
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:44:00 PM
Tanya,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/6/2014 3:05:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Tanya. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/2/2014 11:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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Date: 7/2/2014 8:20:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tanya :) - I choose your first moving written poem- I like it ! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/2/2014 1:58:00 AM
Hi Tanya, congratulations on a great write about love and heartbreak - I really enjoyed reading this poem! Well done!
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Date: 7/1/2014 6:12:00 PM
Hello Tanya,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/1/2014 2:26:00 PM
|*:*,\(*{{.... I fEEL yOUR pAIN bABY gIRL....KLove *
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