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When I Was

When I was when i was one year old i was very bold, when i turned two i lost my shoes then i turned three and got stung by a bee when i was four I want to the store and felt very bored, Then I turned five And learned to dive, When I got six I learned to fix, Then I turned Seven and wished to eleven, But i turned eight And got a team mate, Nine is the number That caught me in trouble, Ten followed nine With a wisdom full mind And now i am Eleven

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Date: 3/17/2016 12:21:00 AM
mohsin farooq lone, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:56:00 PM
MOHSIN, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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Date: 4/6/2011 10:02:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today mohsin. I hope to get back soon to read more. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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