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When I Think of You

When I think of you..I get the warm feel of friendship, born not in a place, but from time and space. Friendship has a price -- Our first encounter, a caustic remark as I perceived, caused my ire to rise and my feathers to ruffle. What did this broad know anyway! When I think of you…I see Don Quixote and I wish there was a role for me. Dulcinea is taken and I refuse to be Sancho Panza. In quick response, being as strong-willed, as this iron-fisted lass, correspondence exchanged, and in my slow southern country style, I found, behind that northern accent was a wealth of information, and a heart of gold. From the first, I saw the masculine strength of his spine, aged, idealistic, chivalrous and yet naïve. Your indomitable will, your use of pen as sword, your 'walk the walk' Christian talk drawled. I found a poet with style and class, whose love for poetry only exceeded her willingness to expand the art and help others to grow. A man of many skills and kindness, I watched you spend night after night, cajoling poetry demons, leaving your Dulcinea in her bed alone to tilt at blowhards, as if they were windmills. In an exchange of thoughts and ideas, I gained respect for the person. I saw how beneficial her advice could be, and how she reveled in sharing what had taken her a lifetime to achieve. I had found a friend. My life time had been full of peasants with false faith and, he showed me his way.. an honorable way like unto my own, always trusting till proven wrong, always open-handed and open hearted, a knight in search of the Holy Grail. Differences, we have many, and we discuss them openly. Opposites on almost every level, but oh, what an experience to learn. So, charming a man who sees opposites but still value, causing a smile of knowing, not of opposites, but of vast similarities of heart and soul, cloaked in language, so rich, and expansive, the loop of left to right, the forming of the sign of infinity has expanded beyond his view, but not mine. I know. Dulcinea and Don Quixote hand and hand reach for the spirit daughter. I've never met the face, but I have found her words to ring true, her character to be upright and just, and I see a moral and disciplined soul. Through our mutual understanding and respect for the view of the other, we each have grown in our poetic journey, and the paths of our daily lives. a place is set and candles light the way-- mapquest Henderson's & Guzzi, friends forever...

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Date: 1/15/2014 2:13:00 PM
Wonderful poem.. Congrats Debbie on your fine win! love
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:46:00 AM
I noticed your name on the winners' list way up at the top..Way to go..Congrats.Sara
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:21:00 AM
Outstanding piece! Congratulations Debbie.
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:00:00 PM
Enjoyed the write on Platonic relationships and congratulations on the fine win, Deb
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:10:00 PM
Looks like this is not the first time I read this. It is even better seeing it again!
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Date: 1/14/2014 6:09:00 PM
oh, I knew who you were describing right away, Debs. BIG congrats for you two and your friendship as well!! Who did that last haiku. It's awesome.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/14/2014 6:54:00 PM
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Date: 1/14/2014 9:06:00 AM
Debbie,a wonderful poem.Congratulations. great win.(: ) Jenish.
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Date: 10/16/2012 3:49:00 PM
Debbie,, congratulations in Traice's sweet 's "When I think of you.. I (collab)" contest.. :-) always~pd
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Date: 10/14/2012 9:06:00 AM
‡ I Failed To Mention, Tis A Beautiful Favourite, And I Love The Title, 'When I Think Of You.' Beautiful. Love, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/14/2012 9:00:00 AM
‡ One Arrives Upon The Doorstep Of Anothers Poetic Verse, Never Knowing Quite What They Shall Find ? Seldom It Seems Unto Myself Do They Find Such An Extended Compelling And Beautiful Poem As This, Dear Beautiful Debbie. One Walks Away From Its Loveliness Taking This Image In Warmth With Them; Stirring Inside, Of A Beautiful Spirit And Heart; Priceless. Love, Rachel ‡
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Date: 10/12/2012 12:04:00 AM
Congratulations, Debs and for finding such a fine friendship here on Soup.
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Date: 10/11/2012 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's "Collab" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2012 11:21:00 AM
congrats on your win in the contest.. cory
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Date: 10/11/2012 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations to two fine poets.
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Date: 10/11/2012 9:03:00 AM
WOW AND WONDERFUL SENTIMENTS U SHARE WITH CHARLES IN THIS BEAUTIFUL WRITE DEBBIE .. CONGRATS ON ANOTHER TOP NOTCH WIN LUV ..
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Date: 9/16/2012 4:47:00 PM
A poem of mutual respect to say the least...so different u both are, yet so alike!..... Gorgeous words and an invitation so true...could there be a part 2?....Deb, I know that one u reviewed was not a traditional haiku..it was the haiku b4 it , silly. hahah....I still love each and every tid bit of info u impart to my repertoire. U are one classy lassie...and a smart one too.....please let us know when the Henderson's and Guzzi unite...we will all be totally excited for this occasion!!
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Date: 9/13/2012 8:49:00 AM
wonderful dedication Debbie, so poetic, so poignant...
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Date: 9/11/2012 6:03:00 PM
this is wonderful! what a collaboration! it really works quite beautifully. i'm impressed. ~ just want to let you know that my poem "root, root, root" was written after attending the finals of the u.s.open men's final tennis match. my guy lost.
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:47:00 PM
wow, you guys blew me away with this one. WHAT A GOOD collaboration. Best in the show!!
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Date: 9/10/2012 9:03:00 AM
This is an amazing write I think...how your friendship has grown here.....wonderful poem..best wishes to both of you.
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Date: 9/9/2012 7:57:00 PM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d2NCrbXVEdY one more. Oh, please watch this. Trust me, you'll get it. Xoxox
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Date: 9/9/2012 7:45:00 PM
Oh smiling so large my face hurts. So wonderful, both words, sentiments & the true gift of finding a soul that is both identical yet nothing like your own! The best that life offers. Good company, good conversation, a thought to gnaw on, eh? Have you seen 84 CHaring Cross ?? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iPV8sja0dsg copy paste this, hon. It reminds me so of you two, not because of the language, but because of the CONNECTION. Fab book, too! Can't recommend it enough. I could send you my copy?:)
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Date: 9/9/2012 5:33:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to one another, all the best in the contest xx
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Date: 9/9/2012 12:28:00 PM
Fantastic written by both of you - Have a nice Sunday. - / / Love Anne-Lise :)
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