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When I See You

When you smile at me, i can feel it everywhere. Electrifying beauty, you raise every hair. I cant help seeing you when i close my eyes. A picture of perfection, frozen in time. Most gorgeous woman that I've seen in years. So, don't let anyone tell you im not sincere. Burning desire and i feed the flames. Why i pay you compliments, you keep the change. I know a woman's worth, and you exceed that. Whatever makes a woman incredible, you succeed at. Your sway when you walk, your voice when you speak. Hard to pinpoint what exactly makes you unique. But everything about you leaves me speechless. You're my greatest goal, im just trying to reach it. A uncertain future's what im trying to peek through. And i cant help but wonder....when i see you.

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Date: 1/30/2016 9:40:00 AM
Just give this poem to her, she'll notice. Great write,Bruce.
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