When I New

It seems like a world away When we met on that hot summer day To me it was just plain to see That you should be with me When you turned and looked my way I could almost hear you say You felt the same way too And that's when I knew all i needed was you.

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John Freeman

Date: 8/26/2009 6:17:00 PM

Awesome poem, God bless, Sincerely Moses

Diane Christian

Date: 8/26/2009 11:03:00 AM

with God all things are possibe, a beautiful write whick spoke to my heart and how me and josh feel that every single day, God bless you from diane

Diane Christian

Date: 8/26/2009 11:02:00 AM

aww so great I like this poem so much, this is so true I believe in love at first sight, it happened with me and Josh my husband, we met in december 2007 and we got married in april 2008 just four months of meeting but when we met the Lord just made us click in a big way, it wasn't liek a whirl wind romance God sent us a huracine which swept us both clean off our feet, we have been marred 16 months and have been together 2 years in december so this poem means a lot to me, cont...