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WHEN I LOVE THEE

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Below is the poem entitled WHEN I LOVE THEE which was written by poet Olive Eloisa Guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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WHEN I LOVE THEE

I LOVE THEE I am no voluptuous beauty nor do I live a life of purity I can only say: I love wholeheartedly with all I am so truthfully I keep my heart open though it gets hurt so often I avoid to be irate as I know love changes the heart rate.. Guys tried to coo and woo, they say words as for "only you" Yet, hard to believe it is true as I see some untrue I give chances as my heart marks with tact entrances I learned from various instances looking man in romances In places where rules impede, two persons who wants to bid Not of money but of affection, in them must be determination I love thee not of what you have… Not even of who you are but to how you are to me… If I love you, don't tell me much what to do… As me, myself will show you, I am that real and true.. Yes, I am liked by many but tell you what: I don't like this honey nor am I proud of it in anyway One is enough to make me stay Stand with me through it all, I give my best not to fall My name your sweetest call echoing in every wall.. Hold me firm yet dear; allow me to move closely We'll make it anyhow, treading smoothly on flows... We are strong, aren't we? No one moving alone Together we'll face phases in tune, though there will dunes.. © OLIVE ELOISA D. GUILLERMO 3:25 pm, 07/13/2013 CONTEST: ANY POEM GOES #13 SPONSOR: POET DESTROYER 8TH PLACE (TO GOD BE THE GREATEST GLORY)

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  1. Date: 10/30/2014 6:45:00 AM
    This poem is one of my favorites, your maturity and self awareness is respectable, while your willingness to put yourself out there for love is admirable :) You have a ton of talent Olive!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 10/30/2014 8:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks much John . i appreciate you liking it..
  1. Date: 10/14/2014 1:43:00 PM
    Wow, I sure like the girl in this poem. Faithful, loyal, loving, true. Oh to meet, say 'How do you do' and when I close my eyes I see a beautiful you. The kind of girl every guy would be delighted to have in their life. Like Dr. Ram, it's going to my favs, James :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 10/14/2014 9:10:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    and this one of my faves too among all the one I have written.. .. :) thanks much.. :D but well this not only for girls for a guy too.. :D
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 5:13:00 AM
    Wonderful poem penned well and congrats on the win, olive. This goes to my fav

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 5:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks sir.. :) to Good be the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:20:00 AM
    Olive:) Awesome win.... Take care Love *Skat

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks skat.. :) to God always the glory.. :)
  1. Date: 3/16/2014 4:03:00 AM
    Olive, Congratulations! Thank you for the support ~LINDA~

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 5:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks :) to God always be the glory
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 5:21:00 PM
    Knowing self from within, in order to love self & others beyond. All or nothing when it comes to matters of the heart. Nicely written!

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 6:04:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :) thanks.. i remember you one of my commentor before :)
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 3:51:00 PM
    This is a touching poem...very strong emotions expressed here. Describes my type of woman in some ways!! :)

    Guillermo Avatar Olive Eloisa Guillermo
    Date: 3/16/2014 6:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks much.. :) to God always the glory :)