When I Love Thee

I LOVE THEE I am no voluptuous beauty nor do I live a life of purity I can only say: I love wholeheartedly with all I am so truthfully I keep my heart open though it gets hurt so often I avoid to be irate as I know love changes the heart rate.. Guys tried to coo and woo, they say words as for "only you" Yet, hard to believe it is true as I see some untrue I give chances as my heart marks with tact entrances I learned from various instances looking man in romances In places where rules impede, two persons who wants to bid Not of money but of affection, in them must be determination I love thee not of what you have… Not even of who you are but to how you are to me… If I love you, don't tell me much what to do… As me, myself will show you, I am that real and true.. Yes, I am liked by many but tell you what: I don't like this honey nor am I proud of it in anyway One is enough to make me stay Stand with me through it all, I give my best not to fall My name your sweetest call echoing in every wall.. Hold me firm yet dear; allow me to move closely We'll make it anyhow, treading smoothly on flows... We are strong, aren't we? No one moving alone Together we'll face phases in tune, though there will dunes.. ________________________________________________________ © OLIVE ELOISA D. GUILLERMO 3:25 pm, 07/13/2013 ***CONTEST: ANY POEM GOES #13 SPONSOR: POET DESTROYER 8TH PLACE (TO GOD BE THE GREATEST GLORY) ***Sponsor SKAT A Contest Name Any Old Poem #5 4th place

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John Castellenas

Date: 9/1/2020 12:00:00 AM

A blessing poem shared dear Olive. "Stand with me through it all, I give my best not to fall My name your sweetest call echoing in every wall.." I love the above lines. When someone name is the sweetest words, we know. We have found our utopia. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/5/2015 8:47:00 AM

Congrats dear Olive! It's been a blessing having read this divine write!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/5/2015 3:15:00 AM

Olive, congratulations. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 7/4/2015 7:46:00 PM

Olive :) CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. LOVE SKAT :)

Jason Conley

Date: 10/30/2014 6:45:00 AM

This poem is one of my favorites, your maturity and self awareness is respectable, while your willingness to put yourself out there for love is admirable :) You have a ton of talent Olive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 8:30:00 AM

thanks much John . i appreciate you liking it..

James Fraser

Date: 10/14/2014 1:43:00 PM

Wow, I sure like the girl in this poem. Faithful, loyal, loving, true. Oh to meet, say 'How do you do' and when I close my eyes I see a beautiful you. The kind of girl every guy would be delighted to have in their life. Like Dr. Ram, it's going to my favs, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/14/2014 9:10:00 PM

and this one of my faves too among all the one I have written.. .. :) thanks much.. :D but well this not only for girls for a guy too.. :D