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When I Look At You

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When I Look At You

When I look at you,
I remember our 
First kiss, out first hug,
The first time you looked at me.
When I look at you my heart
Beats a million miles an hour,
When you look at me
My heart races uncontrollably,
And it skips beats.
When I look at you,
My heart finds it's home.
You know they said,
"Home is where the heart is."
Briana Lynn

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  1. Date: 3/7/2013 3:23:00 AM
    Briana a very good romantic write...David

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:54:00 PM
    Nice work Briana, on the third line, I think you meant our: keep your creative pen flowing...Raul

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 11:14:00 PM
    Nice work on this romantic haiku.