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When I Failed

WHEN I FAILED Tears is what strolled past me Lost and sad is what i feel When it all crush me clean My tears is full to the brim Now i know life is not as it is in movies And not as seen in the Disney’s The greats are not made by eases’ I failed but still do not cease Life thought me hard so young I saw my life crushed all along Now i see life so real; not long I fell and disappointed but now strong

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Date: 10/26/2012 7:42:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Ojobo. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
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