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When I Die

when i die the clocks will keep ticking the earth will not mourn even you my love will not miss a heartbeat nor will you pause to hold your breath all the warmth and emotion inside will escape me the earth will accept me cold and all this makes me wonder will i be treasured inside you even when memories of me grow faint will you still see me in your surrounds will you hear my voice or will i my love,be no more out of sight out of mind,,,,

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/21/2013 8:14:00 AM
nice poem. i love it
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Date: 5/10/2013 11:14:00 PM
A beautiful write Nico... Emotional thoughts...Answers we hope to be good and true and endless...Love Diana
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Date: 5/10/2013 9:26:00 PM
Nico, :-) I'm taking this moment to wish you an early Happy Mother's day. Just in case, I can't hang around the soup past Saturday Night. May you enjoy all the blessings a mother engraves in our hearts. About your poem: very deep... and ends with a sad thought... Linda
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