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When I Die

When I die Do not remember me My corpse will not care; Do not draw me back there With words you never said While I drew in air; Spare me the ceremony And all the orchestrated grief. If you go on with your funeral show Stopping your mouths for a moment or two I doubt the angels will be impressed With a moment's self-restraint They will look on with stolid eyes Bearing with you for a little while Until the time comes For you to go, And for you to be ferried To the fires below.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/13/2012 9:27:00 AM
Mike., a very deep poem, Stopping by to wish you a beautiful Happy Mothers Day :-D I'm hoping God will hear my wishes and send my love too find many mothers in good health, and I pray he continues to give my mother the strength to fight everything her body is battling with right now, God bless~ xoxoxo PD
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Date: 4/27/2012 7:53:00 PM
Hi Mike! So happy to read something of yours:) This is very good and some much is said with so few words. Pretty moving piece for me. Can't wait to read more!
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Date: 4/27/2012 3:09:00 PM
hi,its nice stopping by to read your poem..welcome to poetry....hope you find it exciting here like i did
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Date: 4/26/2012 10:39:00 AM
most dark yet interesting peice i have read today. Thanx for sharing this
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