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When I Close My Eyes...I See

When I close my eyes… I see us living In a lovely cottage in front of a lake Where the trees are perfect And the views breathtaking And nature speaks when the winds play When I close my eyes… I feel the scent A mixture of pine in the distant woods And rejoice the pleasure of the solely leisure Where my poems fly in the air of nature With a flash of sweet bliss of gratitude When I close my eyes… I see us running Through amazing forests in the early morn And I feel the sun rising calm and peaceful A perfume of wild flowers dancing blissful Guiding our path all the way long When I close my eyes… my dreams comes real When we share together our joys and sorrows In a lovely cottage in front of a lake Where we smile forever amused as we never With roses and lilacs whispering in the air

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Date: 4/7/2010 4:07:00 AM
Great romantic, passionate, and fantasy write. Keep the creative pen flowing. If I have not done so welcome to soup..Hope your stay is happy and long..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/6/2010 8:31:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/3/2010 11:29:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Gloria. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2010 11:02:00 AM
ENJOYED THE WRITE... HAVE A HAPPY EASTER SUNDAY WEEKEND
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