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When I Close My Eyes

I close my eyes lay my head a pone my pillow for the first time in weeks I dream of you the laughs we had the memories we made the kiss we shard the love we had as I woke with a startle I notice that tears still streamed down my cheeks why they streamed I had no clue but i knew it was not from anger, or regret but of the lost of my first love the lost of happiness that I’ll remember for all my life

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Date: 3/17/2010 11:31:00 AM
What a wonderful day it is today and it is a pleasure to have time to read some poetry today. I am happy that yours is amongst the ones I have read today Brittany. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2010 5:02:00 PM
enjoyed reading today--first love is sweet
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Date: 3/16/2010 12:32:00 PM
I close my eyes Lay my head upon my pillow For the first time in weeks I dream of you: The laughs we had The memories we made The kiss we shard The love we had As I woke with a startle I notice the tears still Streaming down my cheeks Why they streamed I had no clue But I knew it was not From anger, or regret; But of the loss of my first love The loss of happiness that I’ll Remember all my life.
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