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~When I am With You~ (Rhyme) Its really amazing what I think Most of the time when I am with you I've never thought that being in love Could make me feel like this with you So many things that just come to me So many thoughts that come to my mind When I look into those sexy brown eyes of yours I wonder if you can see what I have here in mind I know that most of the time Is very hard for some people to believe In love of any kind and you must know that by now Some people choose to love while others prefer to grieve As for me I truly believe that loving is worth everything all the time Because love is the best thing that can happen to any of us any time. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,03,2015

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Date: 1/4/2015 7:41:00 AM
Great Love poem D. Perfect 10. I always appreciate your love poems. You are deep.Your friend Rajat
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Date: 1/3/2015 4:09:00 PM
Dear "D", Another one of your most exquisite love writes that you've once again rendered so very well!! A magnificent 7+++++ from and this one's going in my New Year's FAV file!! (I always like how you visually punctuate your poetry with the kinds of photos you post in the NOTES block.) The certainly work with me!! Very Well-Done My Dear. The message you present is quite clear. Love is that all-emotive and all-important force in our lives. Best Always "D," Gary
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