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When Humans Are Trees

tears passing lids, I look up above the sky without clouds and it all points towards crushing the young love my eyes open, my eyes close caressing the glass I hold tight and it's worth every look in his eyes when humans are trees, you are rooted to me found the life in you, found the death too sever these branches- it's the only way hands hold nothing my heart's starting to meld forget me like your childhood memories but your eyes cut mine, and I feel everything you are flipping sides tears resurrect, but the water is dead when humans are trees, you are rooted to me found the life in you, found the death too sever these branches- it's the only way

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/21/2015 12:14:00 AM
Hi Raven, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/20/2015 10:06:00 PM
Raven, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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