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When First We Met

This poem is a really a Rondelet When first we met my heart skipped a beat and I smiled When first we met I thought I should leave, but not yet She seemed like an innocent child This girl in her teens sweet and mild When first we met 6-22-18

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Eve Roper

Date: 6/27/2018 7:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Alfred Hugs Eve ~`*

Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/27/2018 9:21:00 PM

Thank,Eve.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/26/2018 12:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Well done! :)

Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/26/2018 1:08:00 PM

Thanks, Susan.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/26/2018 12:20:00 AM

Nice

Silent One

Date: 6/25/2018 7:12:00 AM

I hope she is still sweet and mild Alfred.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Alfred Berggren
Date: 6/26/2018 1:09:00 PM

Thanks, Silent One.