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When Eyes Close

The following poem is a personal one, a memory from decades ago about a specific person and time in my life. It's a memory I cherish so having so many people find the emotion and impact in the lines was quite a blessing to me. That it made POTD is something I embrace with a great deal of appreciation and gratitude. Close my eyes ~ I’m on that mountain lush with Autumn taste. Close my eyes ~ We are love entwined in crisp fall leafed lace. Close my eyes ~ Lips of first perfect kiss, once more bliss moist my lips Close my eyes ~ We are young again, connecting eyes, souls and skin Close my eyes ~ Sharply, my satin-sad edged truths wonder if autumn ever takes you … too … Close your eyes ~ Kiss me with eager touch. As fire’s savior, thrill to shivers in dew soft, mountain air. Caress-wrapped, we lay in misty vapor from dusk’s bursting promise of brazen flush until dawn’s fresh sonnet on takings rush. Close your eyes ~ Grasp our hearts of innocent stares watching how teenage summer dies when feelings are autumn implied Richard Lamoureux - POTD OR POTW Contest March 9, 2017

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Date: 4/28/2019 7:17:00 AM
Lush images and taut emotional pulls lead the reader into a world of young love and times nearly forgotten. Well done, Cay Cay.
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Date: 4/27/2019 5:46:00 PM
CayCay, I am so pleased to see your lovely poem on the podium again! My heartfelt congratulations to you. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/25/2019 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Richard's contest CayCay. You know I faved this last year. I enjoyed reading it again. I hope you are well? We need to catch up. Hugs, Connie xxoo
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Date: 4/25/2019 9:44:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Cay Cay. One of my favourites on this winners list. Thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 3/6/2018 9:41:00 PM
Congrats, CayCay. Well done.
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Date: 2/28/2018 11:42:00 AM
Wonderful imagery CayCay, congratulations...
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Date: 2/26/2018 6:42:00 PM
Hi CayCay, Congratulations on your first place win in the contest. It is much appreciated with this excellently written piece. This write sings so gently into the heart stirring the emotions with loves gentle feeling. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 2/26/2018 3:38:00 PM
So wonderful to read this gem again caycay, congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/26/2018 3:01:00 PM
Just beautifully written, so romantic and more, CayCay! Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/26/2018 11:24:00 AM
Perfect. Your poem 'opened my eyes' to fresh, new images of love. I myself "shivered" with the "thrill." Congrats on a well-deserved trophy winner, CayCay! :) Gershon
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Date: 2/26/2018 7:08:00 AM
Oh CayCay, you have outdone yourself on this beauty! Congratulations on your first placement! This is going into my faves! I loved it! xxoo : )
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Date: 2/26/2018 5:26:00 AM
love the layout. love the romance .love the passion. love the rhythm love everything about this...thank you and congrats : )-luloo
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Date: 2/26/2018 5:26:00 AM
love the layout. love the romance .love the passion. love the rhythm love everything about this...thank you and congrats : )-luloo
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Date: 4/23/2017 10:26:00 AM
Wow, how beautiful!
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Date: 4/7/2017 12:51:00 AM
So romantic, Cay Cay. Lovely poem I think we all can relate to. And, congrats on making the "Best New Poems" list.
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Date: 3/31/2017 7:44:00 PM
Wow what a dazzlingly beautiful write, Cay Cay. Loved it all! a7 Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 3/17/2017 6:22:00 AM
How lusciously descriptive, CayCay. Oh my...that 2nd to last stanza made me shiver. Hugs to you, sweet friend.
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Date: 3/16/2017 5:33:00 PM
I am so impressed with this beautiful poem CayCay! I see why it won POTD! Congratulations it is so deserving of the honor. Your repetitive lines add to the importance of each stanza enhancing them. Your ending is superb! I'm sorry I missed this and am only now commenting.# 7 XXOO Connie
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Date: 3/16/2017 9:16:00 AM
A beautiful poem of love, CayCay:) congratulations on well deserved POTD :)
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Date: 3/12/2017 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD....a worthy 7.
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Date: 3/11/2017 10:57:00 PM
Imagine me finding you here on tip spot and how proud I am for being right. You are getting gooder and gooder. If I were a rich man I would pay you for this poem. Wonder what Tim thinks about that kiss ha ha love it
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Date: 3/11/2017 7:18:00 PM
Congrats! Such beautiful flowing visions...love the last line:)
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Date: 3/11/2017 5:51:00 PM
Congratulations for your splendid POTD. It's definately a Wow!!!
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Date: 3/11/2017 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations on receiving POTD. Simply beautiful!
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Date: 3/11/2017 12:33:00 PM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d. CayCay - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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