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When Eagles Clash

Two eagles hover over the bare bones of a poem leaving choice morsels for the appetite of the other. And with poetic hunger, they devour each other's words occasionally choking upon the other's genius. With wings spread wide, they ride a poetic thermal of prose eagerly dipping into the ink of the other's thoughts. For when eagles combine talents to create poetry oh, what wonders they conceive amidst such sheer majesty! They peruse through ideas like a garden of delights collaborating on proes fueled by dueling dreams. And collectively nurture fledgling thoughts, giving them wings as they scratch enigmatic lines using both claws and beaks. Searching for perfection, two egos soar beyond belief, seamlessly approaching the heights of creativity. When eagles clash, they oft release raw, unbridled feelings that converge, crafting compatible prose worthy of note. (Blank Verse) 2/27/2016

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Date: 3/2/2016 8:28:00 AM
What a lovely page with a profound group of words. I am loving every aspect of this piece. Thumbs up friend and a definite 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thanks Funom, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/27/2016 8:37:00 PM
Stunning, Emile! What a description of poetry that threatens to override the other, while at the same time listen and learn. Your wit and creativity shine through in this imaginative metaphor. For me, this poem was was worthy of note.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/28/2016 8:03:00 AM
Timothy, you bring a smile to my day, and for that I thank you my friend. Emile.
Date: 2/27/2016 12:55:00 PM
like-minded people take the extra mile to create something extraordinary; very vivid and unique read, emile...huggs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/28/2016 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your supportive comments. Emile.
Date: 2/27/2016 12:26:00 PM
No, not confusing - beautiful, deep and extremely creative. You are an awesome writer and this prose about poets collaborating is genius - to me. I have only done a few collabs, but you captured the talent flow and possibilities ... CayCay 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/27/2016 12:33:00 PM
Thanks so much CayCay, I appreciate how you have expressed yourself with such supportive comments. Emile.
Date: 2/27/2016 11:45:00 AM
Confusing!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/27/2016 12:31:00 PM
Thanks for your time Amy, not all poems are to everyone's liking. Emile.

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