When Dreams Attack

When dreams attack The mind becomes crippled Becoming useless Russell Sivey

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/14/2012 10:24:00 AM

Happy weekend to you Russell. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 7/13/2012 2:07:00 PM

Yes, indeed - words of wisdom here, my friend

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2012 12:34:00 PM

vivid and personal poem that pulls me in,russell... the image of dreams attacking the mind has a powerful tonality! like it a lot. , my friend..:) huggs!

Cindy Cayton

Date: 7/13/2012 10:22:00 AM

well written.

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 7/13/2012 10:14:00 AM

Well said, Rusty! A splendid SENRYU with great flow and word use! BRAVO my friend!! Best wishes, Keith