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It is a another joyful dawn of reaching silhouettes, and misty morning fields- the time when clouds come down to visit spreading calm upon the earth All too soon the sun is calling a return back to the sky they must dissipate like magic, leaving traces on the grasses along spider webs and fences to drip slowly from leaves with blithe promises of return, when in the time of another dawn sky and earth for a moment will dance as one.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/9/2013 11:32:00 AM
SUZ , nothing I love more than embracing mornings with beautiful words and imagery. Congratulations love ~SKAT~
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Date: 10/7/2013 5:43:00 PM
How pleasant to have discovered you today! Your writing is gorgeous, your metaphor seemingly endless, and always impressive. I'm hungry for this kind of writing, and gratified to see it in such quantity here. I hope you will give me the benefit of some real critique of my own work,
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:15:00 PM
Excellent, Suz. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 10/2/2013 9:41:00 PM
HI SUZ, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Thanks for supporting my "Morning Due <--not DEW! Contest. SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL- Thanks for the awesome imagery. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem "The Letter". Enjoy my latest blog! "Daybreak" if you like:) AT -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15983&PoetID=18720 **LINDA**
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