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When Darkness Descends

Where a deep raspy breeze fills the air and a hard winter's rain appears take cover in this velvet nest until the disturbance comes to rest softly blow out the candles crawl down into the recesses of the dark climb amongst the hollows of my holy sanctity where together we can be as one I'll leave light kisses and a reassurance that tomorrow the rise of the sun will be made filled with love and heartfelt adoration with an affirmation our glow will never fade Be my vestige and I will be your light Gentle beats of heaven holding ever tight

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/22/2016 8:11:00 PM
Where there is darkness there is art! Great write!
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Date: 12/22/2016 1:53:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet, to me it is a sonnet. I love this line: "Be my vestige and I will be your light". I am going to hibernate for a bit soon, the place you describe sounds perfect.......
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Date: 12/21/2016 8:04:00 PM
Very nice Tim! Merry Christmas! :)
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Date: 12/21/2016 3:04:00 PM
Throwin' down ain't cha, Romeo:) Very romantic, Tim.
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Date: 12/21/2016 2:52:00 PM
Very beautiful .It sprinkles serenity and security to the heart.Awesome.
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Date: 12/21/2016 2:48:00 PM
Awd how beautiful tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/21/2016 1:17:00 PM
- Agree with Chris; Beautiful and warming poem, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/21/2016 12:34:00 PM
So beautiful and warming Tim.
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