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When Courage Faithfully Flies

When Courage Faithfully Flies (Double Sonnets)(Lin 678) Where man's soul and brave heart meets hope sends great power there to save Life from death that often cheats the weak that could be so brave When faith filled prayer saves man truth comes forth and regains Happiness- life and love plans absent the dirty stains Where man's soul and brave heart meets hope sends great power there to save Life from death that often cheats the weak that could be so brave Look to heaven for its power Man knows not his last day or hour *** *** *** Your loyal words of faith fly To heart that death so often cheats With loss that makes her soul sigh In painful hopeless heartbeats Could the weak again be brave When faith does not remain? Heaven's truth descends to save And cleanse sin's darkened stain. Your loyal words of faith fly To heart that life so often cheats With loss that makes her soul sigh In painful hopeless heartbeats Heart now so brave finds new power New hope gives courage in this hour. Collaboration(Double sonnets) Robert J. Lindley and Aqua Marine 10/24/2016 Note: Sonnet form used (new)-Lin 678 Poem Syllable Counter Results ** Syllables Per Line: 7 8 7 7 7 6 7 6 0 7 8 7 7 0 8 8 Total # Syllables: 100 ** Syllables Per Line: 7 8 7 7 7 6 7 6 0 7 8 7 7 0 8 8 Total # Syllables: 100 Total- 7 8 7 7 7 6 7 6 0 7 8 7 7 0 8 8 *** 7 8 7 7 7 6 7 6 0 7 8 7 7 0 8 8 Total # Syllables: 200 88 + 84 = 172 words.

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Date: 10/26/2016 8:27:00 PM
Mate, I just love your sonnets! It is one of my fav forms now because of poets such as yourself Robert. Brilliant! Is this for a contest? Good luck if it is Robert...
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/26/2016 8:38:00 PM
Thanks my friend but it is not for a contest..I just decided to write using my new sonnet form and offered to collaborate with Aqua Marine and together we came up with this double sonnet using the new Lin 678 sonnet form. Pleased that you find it to be good..

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